Take me there

Wrote this rubbing instruction, would someone tell me what you think of it?:
Now listen up, you dirty little slut. first you'll take a feather and tickle yourself, starting from your face, ears and neck. SLOW! you work your way down your filthy body. every stroke giving you an explosion of goosebumps. you reach your panties, where you stop, and switch to your toes and feet. from there you work that nice feather up your slutty inner thighs. just when you reach the point, where your dripping wet pussy NEEDS a touch, you swing the tip of the feather over your panties. you cant get enough after the feeling overwhelms you. your needy little cunt has had enough of that light touch, you strip those dripping wet panties of you and slide your hand over your well used pussyhole. up and down, nice and slow and also firm. you start to moan. you can already feel how hard you are gonna cum. you then slip your middle and ringfinger inside, and work your way to your favourite spot. your other hand is rubbing your clit hard - no more games, you cant hold yourself back anymore. your moaning fastens as your motions do. let it all out, you fucking slut. your legs start to twitch as you come close, your whore-moaning gets so loud, you can hear the neighbor banging on the wall for you to stop. all of a sudden you cant breathe as the orgasm rippes through your body like a hurycane. you fall back into your pillow in silent gasp for air.

I would have one of my friends, the muscular one from the gym, hold your arms above your head while I spent a long time licking your tits and lightly kissing your body, teasing you and making you wet. Then I'd spread your legs and lick your pussy softly. I would take me fingers and spread your lips, exposing your waiting clit. I would put that clit between my lips and suck on it, making you moan and not letting up until you were screaming. I'd be really wet, of course, so I'd have my friend come around and ram his beautiful cock inside of me doggy style. Id be lapping up your juices while I came over and over.

Oh my god! Arechaclitotal does it to me every time. I clicked on her name to read her other writings and now I have to stay home all day.

Ha ha. Good for you. I used to post anonymously, so not everything is there.

Oh miss I want to suck your clit until you can't take it anymore then slide my big cock into your wet pussy and repeat this for the whole day.