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My girlfriend dropped me and i had to move home
My mom knew i was a lesbian 23 year old girl. She meant her several times . Mom knew she was the boss. She had my daughter in pretty little girls clothes , it turned mom on seeing me act like a baby with so many ruffles and lace and her waist long hair swinging around . What really got mom turned on when she took me over her knee and gave me i spanking in front of my mom. I could see my mom watching this with a big smile on her face. Her mom love this, seeing her wiggle around over her knee. Her mom said she loved her pretty panties with a smile. Couple days later, i asked my mom if i could move home, i got caught cheating with another girl and we got into a fight. So i need a place to go crying on the cell. When i arrive at moms house, i walked in and my mom hugged me. Then my mom said what happen to your hair in the back. I told mom my ex girlfriend cut parts of my hair. My mom said she can fix it. No problem. As mom brushed out my hair, telling me my ex fucked up hair as my mom grabbed the scissors with a smile, mom began cutting off my hair. As my 3 long long hair fell to the floor, i ended up with a short pixie.I was crying so hard, my makeup was running. My mom took me to the bathroom and began to fill the tub. Mom began undressing me with a big grin telling me she will hand me wash up. My mom told me she loved my frilly garter pink panties with white stocking. Mom finished removing all my clothes as in got into the tub. I got nervous as mom lathered up the wash cloth and began washing me from my head to my toes. Mom washed my pussy , i was getting off from. she gentle rubbed inside my pussy which made my nipples stick out and mom saw this and began washing my tits. OMG mom was getting me off. Mom dried me off and began dressing her baby . I never seen my mom so happy, snapping my waistbands as she dressed me. With my new haircut, i looked like a little girl. My mom now controls me , spanks me in front of moms friends, which turns her friends on. What is sweet, mom is loaded with money, i do not have to work. I am mommy little girl who loves to be spanked by mom.
Jul 2
She needs to be punished and mom enjoyed giving her a pixie so she looks like a little girl. but she really loves to put you in the tub and wash you.
So, let me get this correct. You cheated on your girlfriend who cut chucks of you long hair off. Then you moved back to your mom who could not wait to fix that long hair you up as her little girl. Gives you a short pixie, then gives you a bath and dresses you up as her little girl who mom loves to spank you in front of her friends. now your rich mom has a 23 year old girl how acts and looks like a 4th grader. a typical freeloader woke girl.
You are correct on writing tips. Poor baby, cheating on your girlfriend got her mad and cut your long hair off in sections. Then go to moms house for help. Mom went off in fantasy land, got her looking like a little girl in your pixie. But giving you a bath, rubbing your pussy and enjoying it make my pussy hot
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